“Ask yourself, what is the story of each scene? What should it convey to the audience?”
I made some decisions today like a director and tried to answer the questions asked in the book “Timing for the Animation“. I went through all the scenes and changed a few sections. In addition to improving the storytelling, I have to consider the deadline, timing, my skills, and the quality of income and how they will all affect the final results.
In this case, some characters have changed, some details have been removed and the focus of the story is just on the main character and what she went through, The side characters like the dog, and parents has removed, and Details like family pictures, the city has removed or increase to just metaphor hints.